I Write Tragedies, Not Sins.

By JKill09
_So our story begins when an innocent girl meets the boy of her dreams and he changes her world. This begins the relationship of Amanda and Joe, but how far would this relationship go? Well, see they loved each other but Joe was a guy, who wasn't happy with one girl but didn't know why. So he let his eyes drift away. All he wanted was to be with this girl named May. She was a reckless girl, only out for some fun. Too bad for Joe because he thought he was the one. He started staying out late, all the time. But Amanda trusted him so she didn't mind. Every night he'd come home as if nothing was wrong. Give Amanda a kiss like he wasn't stringing her along. She'd brag to all her friends, "I met this perfect man". Joe had her heart in the palms of his hands. He disregarded this, he ignored all of her feelings. 'Cause to him, May was just too damn appealing. He needed her, without her he wouldn't last. He acted as if he and Amanda had no past. He'd go out of his way, just to see May. He'd take her everywhere, and she'd make him pay. See, he thought she actually cared about "them". When in actuality, he was just ONE of her men. So Joe is in the middle between love and lust. But staying there is impossible, a decision is a must. His passion got the best of him. He put his heart on the line, would he sink or swim? He jumped in the water, away from his commitment. Amanda couldn't understand what this all meant. In her mind they loved each other for the years they were together. She swore she would be beside Joe forever. But Joe had other plans, his need for passion was ignited. He left Amanda heartbroken, it hurts me to recite it. Joe left her house, he took all his stuff. He took it mildly, Amanda took it rough. She vowed never to love again, because of its effects. Her heart couldn't take it, it was utterly wrecked. Joe wasn't feeling this pain just yet. He was on his way to confess his "love" to a girl he just met. When he arrived at May's door, he caught his breath. Not knowing what he was going to witness next. He walked into her house and looked around. He heard some strange yet familiar sounds. He found May "spending time" with a different man. He dropped the dozen of roses he had held in his hand. He ran away from the house, got in his car and just rode. His tires ate up the road and his heart felt like a heavy load. He thought about all that had happened and cried. With tears in his eyes, he found it difficult to drive. His car hit a bump, flipped, tumbled, then crashed. Slowly rolled off the bridge, into the river and splashed. He didn't attempt to escape. No attempts, no tries. Because in his mind he had already drowned in his lies. Amanda didn't go to his funeral, she stayed home that day. Two invitations in the trash, addressed to Amanda and May. Amanda resolved her conflict, she repaired her heart. In her mind, giving up because of one guy, isn't smart. May wasn't phased, Joe was sheetplay to her. She replaced him the next day with no effort (effert). Joe was forgotten, buried in the minds of all. But what was the cause of his tragic fall? We can say that Joe's life was a shame. We can say that May was entirely to blame. But no matter what we say or what we think of, the story ended with only one true victim, Love.
 

2 comments so far.

  1. xo January 19, 2009 at 7:43 PM
    guess whoooo.

    yo. i saw this on your fbook back when we weren't friends and i was like dayyyummmm boul deep as shit.
  2. GhostWriter March 28, 2009 at 10:23 PM
    Dude that was beautiful

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